Nice picture! But, I think that you should to stand/bring out a little bit more to the characters. Sometimes they merge with the background. But I love it anyway. You did a great job! ^^ Sorry for the bad english.
Oh, no no. I'm sorry if you understood me wrong. I like your drawings but I think that the principal character (one, two or which you drew) should be more marked, stood out, to highlight, emphasized because many details are mingled with the background... I don't know how to explain to you. Sorry.
Thanks~~~~ I'll draw more and improve myself But all of my works are sketch, I want to draw more by using computer and not just using pencils and papers, but I don't know how... I've seen a lot of computer works in this club,and i'm very envy XD